homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What can you do now to be successful in the future? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I can study hard to be successful in the future.
I study hard and I will go to a good university after pass the college entrance exam.
And,I decide what I want to be.
Then,it will be nice tofuture.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Study harder to fulfill your dreams in the future. You can do it!
~t. Kelly^^
What can you do now to be successful in the future? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I can study hard to be successful in the future.
>> Correct.
I study hard and I will go to a good university after pass the college entrance exam.
>> I will study hard and go to a good university after passing the college entrance exam.
And,I decide what I want to be.
>> And, I will decide what I want to become.
Then,it will be nice tofuture.
>> So, I can have a bright future.
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