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Hello [이름]!!!

It was nice to receive your homework. I do hope that you can find time to review the corrections that I\'ve made, But I congratulate you for writing an essay. I do believe that you can further improve your writing skills. Good job and keep it up!!!!

T.Jeny

What\'s the best way to learn a foreign language?
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I want to speak English well.

>>correct

so from now I will think about how to speak
well in Enlish.

>> So from now, I will think about how to speak English well.
 1st thing is thinking about thing in foreign language.

>>First of all, I have to think about the importance of learning a foreign language.
 when to think something, We should imagine in Enlish.

>>We have think about something then translate it in English.
 2nd thing is to shout in Enlish.

>>Second is to speak in English.

We can\'t speak well.

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 but Dont\' afraid to fail in structuring sentence.

>>But don\'t be afraid to fail in constructing sentences.
 3rd thing is to write a Enlish diary everyday.

>>Third is to write a diary in English every day.
 4th ting is to Listen.

>>Fourth is to listen carefully.

 We can listen my enlish record file, and America English drama.

>>We can listen to an English recording or watch an American English drama.
 finally is to rewrite something that Foreign person speak.
>>And lastly, rewrite something we\'ve heard in English.
I know many thing to do but I didn\'t.

>>I know many things but I don\'t apply those to my learnings.
I will try from now on

>>But I will try those things from now on.