Homework
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What would you think of life without colors?
I never imaginae without colors and It would be dark and depressed.
Colors are important thing. I think colors give us energy.
so people need it.
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~~Teacher May~~
I never imaginae without colors and It would be dark and depressed.
>> I can\'t imagine life without colors. The world would be dark and depressing.
Colors are important thing. I think colors give us energy.
so people need it.
>> Colors are important. I think they give us energy so people need it.
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