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2017-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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I have been driving for about 32 years since I got my driver's license. The current driving test in Korea seems to become more difficult than the past when I had taken it because a road test was added. After getting a driver's license, people have to retake an aptitude test including a medical check-up every seven or ten years, which is not a driving test. If someone's age becomes more than 65, he or she has to retake the aptitude test every five years. The Korea Road Traffic Authority is dealing with anything concerning the driver's license and aptitude test with one of the most effective and quickest ways in the world. When I took the aptitude test a few years ago, it took only 30 minutes to finish all. If people have to retake a driving test every five years, one of the advantages would be that the heavy traffic in big cities can be improved because the number of people who want to get a driver's license will decrease. On top of that, frequent tests could make drivers keep on driving safely. Contrarily, one of the disadvantages of frequent tests would be that additional money, workers and time are needed.

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HELLO MR. [이름],
Thank you for sharing your opinion.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
I have been driving for about 32 years since I got my driver\'s license.
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The current driving test in Korea seems to become more difficult than the past when I had taken it because a road test was added.
>> CORRECT 
After getting a driver\'s license, people have to retake an aptitude test including a medical check-up every seven or ten years, which is not a driving test.
>> CORRECT 
If someone\'s age becomes more than 65, he or she has to retake the aptitude test every five years.
>> CORRECT 
The Korea Road Traffic Authority is dealing with anything concerning the driver\'s license and aptitude test with one of the most effective and quickest ways in the world.
>> CORRECT 
When I took the aptitude test a few years ago, it took only 30 minutes to finish all.
>> CORRECT 
If people have to retake a driving test every five years, one of the advantages would be that the heavy traffic in big cities can be improved because the number of people who want to get a driver\'s license will decrease.
>> CORRECT 
On top of that, frequent tests could make drivers keep on driving safely.
>> CORRECT 
Contrarily, one of the disadvantages of frequent tests would be that additional money, workers and time are needed.
>> CORRECT 

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