Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Allen!
Thank you for your composition.
I have already explained the importance of setting expectations from the class.
I\'m glad you were able to accomplish this.
We\'ll talk more tonight.
See you later!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have some requests on this lessons to improve my speaking skills.
>> I have some requests from my teacher to improve my speaking skills.
First of all, I want to learn about effective expressions.
>> Correct
Because I have only limited expressions.
>> This is because my knowledge on expressions is limited.
Secondly, I think that my pronunciation is not good. So It need to be fixed.
>> Secondly, I think that my pronunciation is not good so I need to work on it.
These are my expectations.
>> Correct
If more idea is thought, I will notice to you about these.
>> If other ideas come to mind, I will make sure to let my teacher know.
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