Homework

2017-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher. My answer: I have some requests on this lessons to improve my speaking skills. First of all, I want to learn about effective expressions. Because I have only limited expressions. Secondly, I think that my pronunciation is not good. So It need to be fixed. These are my expectations. If more idea is thought, I will notice to you about these.

강사 첨삭

Hi Allen!

Thank you for your composition.

I have already explained the importance of setting expectations from the class.

I\'m glad you were able to accomplish this.

We\'ll talk more tonight.

See you later!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I have some requests on this lessons to improve my speaking skills.

>> I have some requests from my teacher to improve my speaking skills.
First of all, I want to learn about effective expressions.

>> Correct

Because I have only limited expressions.

>> This is because my knowledge on expressions is limited.
Secondly, I think that my pronunciation is not good. So It need to be fixed.

>> Secondly, I think that my pronunciation is not good so I need to work on it.
These are my expectations.

>> Correct

If more idea is thought, I will notice to you about these.

>> If other ideas come to mind, I will make sure to let my teacher know.

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