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2017-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Who is the girl over there with Mike? 2. We need a secretary with the good knowledge of English. 3. We’re having a terrible weather. 4. What did you do with the stereo I lent you? 5. Could you close the window? 6. My sister lives in London. 7. He fell in love with a German girl while he was working in Germany. 8. Emily is excited about being grandmother.is neede 9. Life would be much less stressful without telephone. 10. A Giant Panda is in danger of becoming extinct.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework.

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You didn\'t get a perfect score but you still did a good job!

Keep learning! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

1. Who is the girl over there with Mike?
>> CORRECT
2. We need a secretary with the good knowledge of English.
>> CORRECT 
3. We’re having a terrible weather.
>> We’re having terrible weather. 
4. What did you do with the stereo I lent you?
>> CORRECT 
5. Could you close the window?
>> CORRECT 
6. My sister lives in London.
>> CORRECT 
7. He fell in love with a German girl while he was working in Germany.
>> CORRECT 
8. Emily is excited about being grandmother.is neede
>> Emily is excited about being A grandmother.
9. Life would be much less stressful without telephone.
>> Life would be much less stressful A/THE without telephone.
10. A Giant Panda is in danger of becoming extinct.

>> THE Giant Panda is in danger of becoming extinct.


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