homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for your composition today! This was well-written. Great job! Keep it up!
T. JanE ^^
She is my boss of the first academy.
>> Correct
HEr quailities inspired me to become a good leader.
>> Correct
At first, the leader has a professionism.
>> First, a leader must be professional.
The leader has insight on different situations but never authoritative and the leader is a part of arbitrator.
>> A leader must have an insight on different situation, but must never be authoritative. S/He must also be an arbitrator.
Leadership is something that is formed natually throught respect and expectaters from other people.
>> Leadership is something that is formed naturally through respect and expectation from other people.
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