homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Topic >> Is it best for people to accept who they are and what they have, or should people always strive to better themselves?
It is easy and comfortable that people to accept who they are and what they have.
but I think if people lives comfortable life,
they could not develope themselves.
So I think people endless should be challenged!
It's because better future than today.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sunny! ^_^
How\'s your day so far?
I hope you\'re feeling warmer. :)
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay.
I agree that being comfortable all the time can make us into lazy people.
When we feel comfortable, we often forget to work and improve ourselves.
That\'s why we should constantly struggle to get out of our comfort zones and improve ourselves.
Anyhow, that\'s my opinion about it.
I\'ll see you again tomorrow. ^^
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry
It is easy and comfortable that people to accept who they are and what they have.>> It is easy and comfortable for people to accept who they are and what they have.
but I think if people lives comfortable life, they could not develope themselves.
but I think if people lives comfortable life, they could not develope themselves.
>> But I think if people live a comfortable life, they would not develop themselves.
So I think people endless should be challenged!
So I think people endless should be challenged!
>> So, I think people should always be challenged!
It\'s because better future than today.
It\'s because better future than today.
>> This is for us to have a better future.
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