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2017-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Hello. Teacher! This is my first homework, sorry for sending it so late. The question is "What would you think of life without colors?" I think if our life without colors it will be simpler. Because, there will be less comparison among dresses. And I can also save the time to choose which color to match my emotion of today. As you know I am not interested in art. So in my first thought, without colors it won't be problem in my life. But compare between with colors and without colors it will be better with colors in life. Because colors have ability to evoke people's emotions.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I like your answer. It\'s literal but very meaningful.

You are the person who is very simple and contented,

like you don\'t take the negative things

but you try to attract the positive things in your life.

Thanks for answering this! I appreciate it ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Hello. Teacher!
This is my first homework, sorry for sending it so late.
The question is \"What would you think of life without colors?\"

>> CORRECT
I think if our life without colors it will be simpler. 

>> If we live our life without colors, it will become simpler.

Because, there will be less comparison among dresses.

>> If you buy clothes, you will not be able to compare to another.
And I can also save the time to choose which color to match my emotion of today.

>> I can also save my time in choosing the best color that would satisfy my emotion for the day.
As you know I am not interested in art. So in my first thought, without colors it won\'t be problem in my life.

>> You know that I am not interested in arts, so my first thought is that, without colors I will have no problems in life.
But compare between with colors and without colors it will be better with colors in life. Because colors have ability to evoke people\'s emotions.

>> But if you are going to choose things with colors to things without colors, it still better to choose colors because colors have the ability to evokes people\'s emotions.

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