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2017-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. I don't know if you have seen my profile. If you have seen it you can know I am [Name]. But China and Korea is the same. Both of the country has female soldier. And they are as strong as male soldier I think. Maybe their strength are less then males, But there skills and courage are the same with the males.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework.

I don\'t know that you are actually Chinese.

Anyway, please check out the corrections I made.

See you tomorrow! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Hello.
I don\'t know if you have seen my profile.

>> CORRECT

If you have seen it you can know I am [Name]. But China and Korea is the same.

>> If you have seen it, you will know that I am [Name].

China and Korea is almost the same.

>> China and Korea are the same.
Both of the country has female soldier. And they are as strong as male soldier I think.

>> Both countries have female soldiers and I think they are as strong as male soldiers.
Maybe their strength are less then males, But there skills and courage are the same with the males.

>> Males may be stronger than females, but their skills and courage are the same with the males.

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