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2017-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What's the best Christmas you've ever had? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. My best Chrismas was I played with my friends in 2016 12/25. I was exciting play with my friends. I skated in the [이름]. At first, all of my friends was not fast. As time passed, the skating skills gradually increased. So,that time I have a grrat day. And this Christmas,I will go to the Lotte World with my friends. It would be my best Christmas,too.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your best Christmas story. Enjoy this Christmas with your friends and family, of course!^^

~t. Kelly^^

What\'s the best Christmas you\'ve ever had? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
My best Chrismas was I played with my friends in 2016 12/25.

>> My best Christmas was on December 25, 2016 because I played with my friends.
I was exciting play with my friends.

>> I was excited to play with my friends. 

I skated in the [이름].

>> Correct.
At first, all of my friends was not fast.

>> At first, all of my friends were slow.
As time passed, the skating skills gradually increased.

>> As time passed by, their skating skills gradually developed.
So,that time I have a grrat day.
>> That\'s why I had a great time on that day.
And this Christmas, I will go to the Lotte World with my friends.

>> Correct.
It would be my best Christmas, too.

>> It will be another best Christmas.

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