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2017-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Have you ever helped someone who was feeling stressful? I am a nurse. so I have met many patients. they are unhealthy. but first of all, they felt stressful. They had lots of thing to think. some people had a family problem, and other people had a economical problem. They cant' solve the problems. So when I meet stressful person, I listen their voice not without any prejudice. at that time he feel relaxed. and their face become bright. after that he go out saying "thank you"

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]!

A happy Hump Day!
It\'s the midweek once again.
I hope that you\'re getting by so far with the hustle and bustle of the week.
Stay positive!

Quote of the day from C. S. Lewis about the future...
\"The Future . . . something which everyone reaches at the rate of sixty minutes an hour, whatever he does, whoever he is.\"

~Teacher Eunice


Have you ever helped someone who was feeling stressful?
>> Correct!
I am a nurse. so I have met many patients. they are unhealthy. but first of all, they felt stressful.

>> I am a nurse so I have met many unhealthy  patients and were stressful.

They had lots of thing to think. some people had a family problem, and other people had a economical problem.

>> They had to think about a lot of things like family and economical problems.

They cant\' solve the problems.

>> Correct!

>> OR: They can\'t solve their problems by themselves.

So when I meet stressful person, I listen their voice not without any prejudice. at that time he feel relaxed. and their face become bright. after that he go out saying \"thank you\"

>> When I meet a stressful person, I listen to them without any prejudice so they feel more relaxed and their face become bright, after that they will thank me for listening to them.

>> OR: I tend to listen to a person without prejudice so they can be more comfortable in casting away their burden in life.

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