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2017-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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My favorrite number is 7. The reason is that I used the number 7 in my election at school. And the number 7 means lucky in many countrys. So many people like th numbe seven and I am the one who likes the number even. By the way, what is your favorite number? Please answer on the comments. ^_^

강사 첨삭


Good afternoon [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework. I like your answer. It\'s totally appropriate to the question. I also provided  my answer at the bottom part of the page.

See you tonight!

Amanda ^-^


My favorite number is 7. 

>> Correct
 The reason is that I used the number 7 in my election at school.

>> OR: When I ran for student council president in our school, I chose the number 7 to be my candidate number.


 And the number 7 means lucky in many countrys. 

>> Also, the number 7 means lucky in many countries.

 
 So many people like the numbe seven and I am the one who likes the number even.

>> Many people like the number 7 and I am definitely one of them.


 By the way, what is your favorite number? Please answer on the comments. ^_^

>> Correct


My answer: I like many numbers, but my favorite is the number 8. Many people consider it as the luckiest number, especially in Chinese culture. They might be right or they might be wrong. In my opinion,  it doesn\'t really matter. I don\'t necessarily believe in luck. I believe that hard work, perseverance and humility  helps us achieve our goals in life. ^-^

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