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I think the difference between being wise and smart is how the person can consider many things at once. Just memorizing knowledge and using it can be easy. It's not hard to meet smart people in every places. However we often see so called smart and elite people make serious mistakes and eventually fail. For example, there is a former prosecutor who goes on trial due to wrongful exercise of authority. He graduated the best university in Korea, he passed the bar exam with very high score and eventually became a senior secretary to the president for civil affair. No one will doubt that he's smart. However he didn't care other people at all and only focused on his success. If he was wise enough, he would consider other people's benefit and welfare and hadn't abused his authority. Many unsolved problems contain human factor so people who don't care about other's welfare and happiness are hard to be wise.
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Hello there [이름]!
I am really amazed with how you point out things.
I am really proud of you. :)
It is true that people often mistake being wise as being knowledgeable.
I think being wise is using your knowledge to a good or greater cause.
Most of us are intelligent but we don\'t know how to use the intelligence that we posses for the benefit of others.
I am guilty of that at times.
Anyhow, let\'s do our best to be a better and wiser person each day.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher Charry
I think the difference between being wise and smart is how the person can consider many things at once. >> CORRECT!
OR >> In my opinion, the difference between being wise and smart is how the person can consider many things at once.
Just memorizing knowledge and using it can be easy.
>> Just memorizing information and using it can be easy.
It\'s not hard to meet smart people in every places.
>> It\'s not hard to meet smart people in every place.
However we often see so called smart and elite people make serious mistakes and eventually fail.
>> However, we often see so called smart and elite people make serious mistakes and eventually fail.
For example, there is a former prosecutor who goes on trial due to wrongful exercise of authority.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> For example, there is a former prosecutor who who is currently investigated due to wrongful exercise of authority.
He graduated the best university in Korea, he passed the bar exam with very high score and eventually became a senior secretary to the president for civil affair.
>> He graduated from the best university in Korea. He passed the bar exam with a very high score and eventually became a senior secretary to the president for civil affair.
No one will doubt that he\'s smart.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> He is definitely smart.
However he didn\'t care other people at all and only focused on his success.
>> However, he didn\'t care about other people at all and only focused on his success.
If he was wise enough, he would consider other people\'s benefit and welfare and hadn\'t abused his authority.
>> If he was wise enough, he would consider other people\'s benefit and welfare and wouldn\'t abuse his authority.
Many unsolved problems contain human factor so people who don\'t care about other\'s welfare and happiness are hard to be wise.
>> Many unsolved problems contain human factors so people who don\'t care about other\'s welfare and happiness are hard to be wise.
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