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2017-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What do you and your family like to do together? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. We eat dinner together. And,we have lots of talks,too. I like to eat dinner together. And we like to go to travel together.We have memory our family. I love very much to go to travel with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Enjoy more fun activities with your family. Create more happy memories with them. Have a good day!

~t. Kelly^^

What do you and your family like to do together? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
We eat dinner together. And, we have lots of talks, too.

>> Correct.
I like to eat dinner together.
>> I like to have dinner with them.
And we like to go to travel together.

>> And we like to travel together.

We have memory our family.

>> We have fun memories of our family.
I love very much to go to travel with my family.

>> I love to travel with my family very much.

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