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2017-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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I wish I had a extremely huge tiramisu cake. Because a tiramisu cake is totally yammy. I can eat it just once a week. My mom asked me that what kind of cake I would like on Christmas. I said that a tiramisu cake would be good for me. I think my wish will come true.

강사 첨삭


Hi Kid!

Wow! You answered your homework early. Thank you.

You know what, I wish to have a tiramisu cake for Christmas too. ^-^

Your grammar is improving a lot. Keep up the good work, my dear!

Have a good night!

Amanda :)


I wish I had a extremely huge tiramisu cake.  Because a tiramisu cake is totally yammy.

>> I wish to have an extremely huge tiramisu cake for Christmas because a tiramisu cake is totally yummy. 


 I can eat it just once a week.

>> Correct 

>> OR: I can eat it once a week. 


 My mom asked me that what kind of cake I would like on Christmas.

>> My mom asked me what kind of cake I would like to have on Christmas.


 I said that a tiramisu cake would be good for me.

>> Correct


 I think my wish will come true.

>> Correct

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