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2017-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Our culture is accept being late case by case.. But they are not accept almost. Many Korean officer usally has a lot of workload. If they are late, they usally will deduct fines from their monthly paychecks. And a common saying \'Time is a gold\'. So many Korean doesn\'t like being late.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elaine!

Thank you for completing your composition.

Please take note of the corrections.

We will discuss more in class.

~~ Teacher Sharon

Our culture is accept being late case by case.

>> We don\'t always accept tardiness in our culture.
But they are not accept almost.

>> But for the most part, we don\'t accept it.
Many Korean officer usally has a lot of workload.

>> Many Korean officers have a heavy workload.
If they are late, they usally will deduct fines from their monthly paychecks.

>> If they are late, they are charged with penalties or fines which are deducted from their monthly paycheck.
And a common saying \'Time is a gold\'.

>> We have a common saying that goes, \"Time is Gold.\"
So many Korean doesn\'t like being late.

>> That\'s why many Koreans don\'t like being late.

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