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A year ago, there was a big Baduk(Go in Japanese) match between a Korean player and AI.
We had looked forward to watching it on TV because it was the fight of the century and because everyone wanted know how much modern technology was developed at the time.
Baduk is so sophisticated and strategic that people could think that it was one of the hardest fields that AI could not defeat humans for the time being.
However, AlphaGO armed with AI won with a score of 4-1.
Since then, AlphaGo became stonger so that it was able to defeat all human challengers.
It was because humans had taught AlphaGo how to learn by itself about Baduk.
Now, AlphaGo began to teach human players new strategies and tactics to win the game.
These days, modern technology has contributed to developing even the field of art such as music, writing, painting, architecture and so on.
Putting aside the advantages of it, I feel scared of AI's rapid development.
Humans can't hold the dominant position and status against modern technology any more.
We might be only satisfied with the fact that it is a human who is developing AI.
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Here are your corrections:
A year ago, there was a big Baduk(Go in Japanese) match between a Korean player and AI.
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We had looked forward to watching it on TV because it was the fight of the century and because everyone wanted know how much modern technology was developed at the time.
We had looked forward to watching it on TV because it was the fight of the century and because everyone wanted know how much modern technology was developed at the time.
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Baduk is so sophisticated and strategic that people could think that it was one of the hardest fields that AI could not defeat humans for the time being.
Baduk is so sophisticated and strategic that people could think that it was one of the hardest fields that AI could not defeat humans for the time being.
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However, AlphaGO armed with AI won with a score of 4-1.
However, AlphaGO armed with AI won with a score of 4-1.
>> CORRECT
Since then, AlphaGo became stonger so that it was able to defeat all human challengers.
Since then, AlphaGo became stonger so that it was able to defeat all human challengers.
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It was because humans had taught AlphaGo how to learn by itself about Baduk.
It was because humans had taught AlphaGo how to learn by itself about Baduk.
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Now, AlphaGo began to teach human players new strategies and tactics to win the game.
Now, AlphaGo began to teach human players new strategies and tactics to win the game.
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These days, modern technology has contributed to developing even the field of art such as music, writing, painting, architecture and so on.
These days, modern technology has contributed to developing even the field of art such as music, writing, painting, architecture and so on.
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Putting aside the advantages of it, I feel scared of AI\'s rapid development.
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Humans can\'t hold the dominant position and status against modern technology any more.
Humans can\'t hold the dominant position and status against modern technology any more.
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We might be only satisfied with the fact that it is a human who is developing AI.
We might be only satisfied with the fact that it is a human who is developing AI.
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