homework

I already made the necessary corrections below. Kindly go over them. See you tomorrow [이름]!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

1. John asked Mel only two months ago and they\'re already engaged!

>>> John asked out Mel only two months ago and they\'re already engaged!
 2. On hearing the news of his mother\'s death, the boy broke down and couldn\'t be consoled.

>>> Correct!
 3. Mr. [Name], after you check out of the Palisades Hotel, come straight to the Conference Center.

>>> Correct!
 4. The two brothers warmed up over a beer in a local bar and resolved their differences.

>>> The two brothers  got together  over a beer in a local bar and resolved their differences.
 5. Liam, as a child, looked up to all of his elder relatives, but it was his grandfather he had a special respect and love for.

>>> Correct!
 6. The employment minister argued angrily with the trade union representative after he said that a strike couldn\'t be showed.

>>>  The employment minister argued angrily with the trade union representative after he said that a strike couldn\'t be  ruled out.
 7. My brother hurt himself while he was off on his new bike.

>>> My brother hurt himself while he was  showing off on his new bike.
 8. Jones missed the game after he got injured. His thigh muscle got torn while he was out together.

>>> Jones missed the game after he got injured. His thigh muscle got torn while he was  warming up.