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2017-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

First, I have to make sure that what I'm speaking is true before I say anything. Then, I would think whether I'm going to say is necessary. I'll also have to think if what I'm going to say wouldn't anger someone by mistake. There are many things that I have to make sure before I say something. But the problem is that I don't always think before I say, and it hurts other's feelings. Which means that I always have to think and consider before I say anything. ps. I mixed today's homework and the other day. I'm sorry about that.

강사 첨삭

There\'s nothing to apologize for [이름]!

I always appreciate your effort! Keep impressing me with your essays, okay?

Have a great afternoon!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


First, I have to make sure that what I\'m speaking is true before I say anything.

>>> Correct!

Then, I would think whether I\'m going to say is necessary.

>>> Then, I will think whether what I\'m going to say is necessary.

I\'ll also have to think if what I\'m going to say wouldn\'t anger someone by mistake.

>>> I also have to think whether what I\'m going to say won\'t anger someone by mistake.

There are many things that I have to make sure before I say something.

>>> Correct!

But the problem is that I don\'t always think before I say, and it hurts other\'s feelings.

>>> But the problem is that I don\'t always think before I speak and that hurts other people\'s feelings.

Which means that I always have to think and consider before I say anything. 

>>> OR: I realized that I always have to think and consider things before I open my mouth / utter some words.


 ps. I mixed today\'s homework and the other day.

>>> I mixed today\'s homework with the other day\'s.

I\'m sorry about that.

>>> Correct!

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