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I don't think more knowledge always guarantees more happiness. There is a proverb in Korea similar with 'ignorance is bliss' and I personally agree with this proverb. People's natural reaction when they encounter with problems is trying to explain the situation. Even when people don't have enough information, they still try to understand the situation. Under that process, if we don't have fully enough knowledge, we often fall into another error or are suffered by uncomfortable feelings. However in many cases, information we have is not enough. I have a friend who cares about her health very much but she's not a doctor or nurse. She has some partial knowledge about health care and is confused when she read new articles since her previous knowledge and the new information often make conflicts. It seems she gets stressed because of her short knowledge but I heard that stress is very harmful to health. If we don't have proper or enough knowledge, the knowledge might decrease our happiness.
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Hi, [이름]! ^_^
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I think sometimes, the concept of, \"ignorance is bliss\", is helpful but there are also times when we need to be knowledgeable enough to surpass certain situations.
Anyhow, that is just my opinion.
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See you again tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry
~Teacher Charry
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I disagree that more knowledge always guarantees more happiness.
There is a proverb in Korea similar with \'ignorance is bliss\' and I personally agree with this proverb.
>> There is a proverb in Korea which is similar with, \'ignorance is bliss\', and I personally agree with this proverb.
People\'s natural reaction when they encounter with problems is trying to explain the situation.
>> People\'s natural reaction when they encounter problems is to try to explain the situation.
Even when people don\'t have enough information, they still try to understand the situation.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Even if people are not very knowledgeable about the situation, they still try to understand the situation.
Under that process, if we don\'t have fully enough knowledge, we often fall into another error or are suffered by uncomfortable feelings.
>> Under that process, if we don\'t have enough knowledge, we often fall into another error or suffer uncomfortable things.
However in many cases, information we have is not enough.
>> However, in many cases, the information we have is not enough.
I have a friend who cares about her health very much but she\'s not a doctor or nurse.
>> I have a friend who cares about her health very much but she\'s not a doctor or a nurse.
She has some partial knowledge about health care and is confused when she read new articles since her previous knowledge and the new information often make conflicts.
>> She has some partial knowledge about health care and is confused when she reads new articles since her previous knowledge and the new information often make conflicts.
It seems she gets stressed because of her short knowledge but I heard that stress is very harmful to health.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It seems that she gets stressed because of her lack of knowledge but I heard that stress is very harmful to health.
If we don\'t have proper or enough knowledge, the knowledge might decrease our happiness.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If we don\'t have proper or enough knowledge, the knowledge might affect our happiness.
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