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1. My favorite season is Summer. Summer is the best season for outdoor activities such as mountain hiking and swimming in the ocean. The hot weather make easy to sweating a lot It\'s so refreshing.
>> My favorite season is Summer. Because summer is the best season ever for outdoor activities such as mountain climbing and swimming. The hot weather makes you easy to sweat a lot. And it is so refreshing.
2. I don\'t think anything else except we can enjoy seasonal fruits in different season in Korea. Especially in winter Mandarin is very delicious and cheap so every winter my family buy this sweet fruits in bulk until February. I got impressed, when I visit Jeju island several years ago in December. Jeju is in the island famous for Mandarin and December is the season it\'s everywhere in Jeju. So what was happening the Guest house that I stayed in. The Host greet and treat with a basket of mandarins and said enjoy it\'s from backyard. Also the restaurant I went for lunch there were big basket of the mandarins with a sign board \"help your self\". Actually It didn\'t look top quality for selling but still very fresh and tasty.
>> I don\'t think we have special traditions associated with different seasons with our country except we can able to enjoy the seasonal fruits in different season in Korea. Especially in winter mandarin is very delicious and cheap, so every winter my family usually buys this sweet fruit in bulk until February. I got impressed, when I visited Jeju Island several years ago in December. Jeju Island is very famous for mandarin and during December this season you can see a lot of mandarins everywhere. Last time that I visited Jeju Island the Guest house that we stayed in, the staff greets us and they give us a basket of mandarins and they said \"\" Please enjoy these mandarins, because it is fresh pick from our back yard\". Not only that, some restaurant that we went for lunch there were big baskets of the mandarins with a sign board \" Please help yourself\". Actually, it doesn\'t look high quality mandarins to sell, but still it is very fresh and tasty.
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