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I late for appointment sometime because it is hard to find the way to go to destination.
>> I was late for an appointment one time because I had a hard time looking for a way to get to my destination.
Beacust of it I always go out early from my home,so my friend or who have appointment with me doesn\'t have to wait for me.
>> Since then, I always go out early from the house whenever I have an appointment so that my friend wouldn\'t have to wait for me.
But stil I\'m late for a appointment sometime even when I go out early, I call to that person and explain why am I late.
>> I\'m still late sometimes but when that happens, I try to call my friends and explain why I\'m going to be late.
Because appointment is very important in a realationship.
>> Keeping appointments are important in every relationship.
It is connected with trust.
>> Relationships are built on trust.
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