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2017-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I late for appointment sometime because it is hard to find the way to go to destination. Beacust of it I always go out early from my home,so my friend or who have appointment with me doesn't have to wait for me. But stil I'm late for a appointment sometime even when I go out early, I call to that person and explain why am I late. Because appointment is very important in a realationship. It is connected with trust

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Hi [이름]!

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I\'m always looking forward to reading about your ideas.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I late for appointment sometime because it is hard to find the way to go to destination.

>> I was late for an appointment one time because I had a hard time looking for a way to get to my destination.

Beacust of it I always go out early from my home,so my friend or who have appointment with me doesn\'t have to wait for me.

>> Since then, I always go out early from the house whenever I have an appointment so that my friend wouldn\'t have to wait for me.

But stil I\'m late for a appointment sometime even when I go out early, I call to that person and explain why am I late.

>> I\'m still late sometimes but when that happens, I try to call my friends and explain why I\'m going to be late.

Because appointment is very important in a realationship.

>> Keeping appointments are important in every relationship.

It is connected with trust.

>> Relationships are built on trust.

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