homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kiddo,
We don\'t have Winter in my country but I like Winter too. It reminds me of Christmas. ^-^
Anyway, you\'ve done a great job with your answers. They are appropriate to the question and you only had few grammatical flaws.
See you tomorrow!
Good night!
Amanda ^-^
My favorite season is winter.
>> Correct
The reason is I can play with snow in winter.
>>The reason is because I can play with snow in winter.
We get angry easily in summer, leaves are irritating in fall, and we do not have snow in spring
>> Correct
Also, we have a tasty Fish bread in winter.
>> Correct
(Fish bread is a bread that have fish shape.)
>> Fish bread is a fish-shaped bread.)
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