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I usually but something to eat when I go to the supermarket.
>> I usually buy something to eat when I go to the supermarket.
I love to eat, so I mostly spent the money for sweets, fruits or beverage.
>> I love to eat so I usually spend most of my money on sweets, fruits or beverages.
Sometime when I feel my intake is out of control I try to control my appetite.
>> Sometimes, when I feel that my intake is out of control, I try to regulate my appetite.
Then make more specific plans.
>> I make more specific plans.
for example fix the number of go to supermarket once a week.
>> For example, I limit the times I go to the supermarket to once a week.
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