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2017-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I usually but something to eat when I go to the supermarket. I love to eat, so I mostly spent the money for sweets, fruits or beverage. Sometime when I feel my intake is out of control I try to control my appetite. Then make more specific plans. for example fix the number of go to supermarket once a week.

강사 첨삭

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I usually but something to eat when I go to the supermarket.

>> I usually buy something to eat when I go to the supermarket.

I love to eat, so I mostly spent the money for sweets, fruits or beverage.

>> I love to eat so I usually spend most of my money on sweets, fruits or beverages.

Sometime when I feel my intake is out of control I try to control my appetite.

>> Sometimes, when I feel that my intake is out of control,  I try to regulate my appetite.

Then make more specific plans.

>> I make more specific plans.

for example fix the number of go to supermarket once a week.

>> For example, I limit the times I go to the supermarket to once a week.

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