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2017-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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What are your plans for 2018? I will be a mother next year july. so I will prepare the circumstances which my baby are growing up. I should save money for him. and I should prepare for maternity leave. I will arrange my work before I have a baby. and I want to study Enlgish more. so I am considering about going to cyber university again. last, I want to learn economy. so I will read a economic newspaper.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!!

We all face challenges in life but it differs on the way we handle  it. So, we need to be strong and be firm in dealing challenges in life.

Just think positive and everything will be fine.....Smile!!!!

Thank you for you homework, you were able to express you opinion about the topic. Great job!!!

I know that learning is a challenge but you just have to do your best in order for you to be successful

T. Jeny


What are your plans for 2018?

>>correct

 I will be a mother next year july.

>>I will be a mother in July of next year.

so I will prepare the circumstances which my baby are growing up.

>>I will prepare for the circumstances while my baby is growing up.

I should save money for him. and I should prepare for maternity leave.

>>I should save money for him and prepare for my maternity leave.

 I will arrange my work before I have a baby. 

>>I will arrange everything at work before I have a baby. 
 and I want to study Enlgish more. so I am considering about going to cyber university again. 

>>And I want to study English more so I am considering about going to cyber university again.
 last, I want to learn economy. so I will read a economic newspaper.

>>Lastly, I want to learn about Economics so I will read Economic newspapers.

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