Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hurrah!
Even when you stop, you keep coming back. This is good!
Thanks for finding time for this task again, James. Look at how well-made most of the sentences below are. Thanks for sharing!
You have also shared this year with me. Thank you very much.
Until the next one!
-Klein-
How are you making out with your tasks right now?
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It seems that I do composition homework in a long time.
>>It seems that I am doing the composition homework again after a long time.
Anyway it will make me upgrade my English skill and it will be helpful for improving my English speaking ability.
>>Correct
In my case, I have several members in my team.
>>Correct
So I don\'t worry about the task that I get.
>>Correct
My colleagues have a great ability to do that work.
>>Correct
I believe my members and they will be ready to solve our problem.
>>Correct
I will make a plan about the task and I will share my idea with my colleague.
>>Correct
We will find a best solution about the task, and we will focus on that work.
>>Correct
We have a confidence and it makes us very well.
>>We have confidence and it makes us very good.
We are thinking about the image after finishing the task.
>>Correct
We will satisfy our task result and it makes us happy because we are company worker.
>>We will satisfy our task result because it makes us happy since we are company workers.
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