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2017-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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How are you making out with your tasks right now? ==> It seems that I do composition homework in a long time. Anyway it will make me upgrade my English skill and it will be helpful for improving my English speaking ability. In my case, I have several members in my team. So I don't worry about the task that I get. My colleagues have a great ability to do that work. I believe my members and they will be ready to solve our problem. I will make a plan about the task and I will share my idea with my colleague. We will find a best solution about the task, and we will focus on that work. We have a confidence and it makes us very well. We are thinking about the image after finishing the task. We will satisfy our task result and it makes us happy because we are company worker.

강사 첨삭

Hurrah!

Even when you stop, you keep coming back. This is good!

Thanks for finding time for this task again, James. Look at how well-made most of the sentences below are. Thanks for sharing!

You have also shared this year with me. Thank you very much.

Until the next one! 

-Klein-

How are you making out with your tasks right now?
 ==> 
It seems that I do composition homework in a long time.
>>It seems that I am doing the composition homework again after a long time. 

Anyway it will make me upgrade my English skill and it will be helpful for improving my English speaking ability.
>>Correct 
In my case, I have several members in my team.
>>Correct 

So I don\'t worry about the task that I get.
>>Correct 

My colleagues have a great ability to do that work.
>>Correct 

I believe my members and they will be ready to solve our problem.
>>Correct 
I will make a plan about the task and I will share my idea with my colleague.
>>Correct 

We will find a best solution about the task, and we will focus on that work.
>>Correct  

We have a confidence and it makes us very well.
>>We have confidence and it makes us very good. 
We are thinking about the image after finishing the task.

>>Correct 
 We will satisfy our task result and it makes us happy because we are company worker.

>>We will satisfy our task result because it makes us happy since we are company workers. 

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