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2017-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I think nuclear weapons should've never been invented. Even though it is the result of war and it saved many allies, it still killed a lot of innocent people who were caught in the crossfire. The bomb was necessary to end the war, but that doesn't change the fact that it was the most harmful weapon that was invented in the history. I think humans would have made nuclear weapons at some point. They can be a affecting weapon that can end a fight fast, if you don't think about a consequences. And still I think they shouldn't have been invented.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday [이름]!

How\'s your hump day? I am excited to hear your stories about your activities today.

Enjoy your day and see you tomorrow, okay?

~Teacher Shanee^^,

I think nuclear weapons should\'ve never been invented.

>>> Correct!

Even though it is the result of war and it saved many allies, it still killed a lot of innocent people who were caught in the crossfire.

>>> Correct!

The bomb was necessary to end the war, but that doesn\'t change the fact that it was the most harmful weapon that was invented in the history.

>>> Correct!

I think humans would have made nuclear weapons at some point.

>>> Correct!

They can be a affecting weapon that can end a fight fast, if you don\'t think about a consequences.

>>> They are weapons that can end the fight immediately but using them have a lot of

disadvantages that must not be overlooked.

And still I think they shouldn\'t have been invented.

>>> Correct!

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