homework
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: If you could go anywhere during Christmas vacation, where would you go and why? Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. ^^,)
I will go into space. Because countries on Earth can go at any time, but the universe is hard to go to.
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Happy Tuesday, [이름]! ^^,)
Good evening!
Thank you for answering your homework.
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I appreciate that you used your imagination in answering this.^^
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_T. Mayleen :)
I will go into space. Because countries on Earth can go at any time, but the universe is hard to go to.
>>> I would go to the outer space because I could go to other countries any time, but it\'s hard to find an opportunity to go to space.
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