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2017-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What are some reasons that people become homeless? I think there are many reasons for different people that become homeless. One of the reason is that some of them just don't want to go home, although they have their own house. For example, Keanu Reeves who is an actor. The other one is that who want to bag sympathy to earn the money, Because of they don't want to earn the money by themselves. So they act as an homeless. And I also think some of the people who really could't go back to home. Maybe because of them suddenly go bankrupt. So their house is in pledge.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for answering homework. I appreciate your opinions. I will share you my answer.

Homelessness can be caused by: poverty, unemployment, lack of affordable housing,

poor physical or mental health, drug and alcohol abuse, gambling, family and relationship breakdown,

domestic violence, and physical abuse. All these factors can cause a person to become homeless.

They can also be one of the reasons why a person remains homeless.

We\'re lucky that we live with comfortably, we eat every day, and we have friends out there who support us.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow!

~~Teacher May~~

I think there are many reasons for different people that become homeless.

>> I think there are many reasons why people become homeless.
One of the reason is that some of them just don\'t want to go home, although they have their own house. For example, Keanu Reeves who is an actor.

>> One of the reasons is that some of them just don\'t want to go home, although they have their own house like Keanu Reeves who is actually an actor. 
The other one is that who want to bag sympathy to earn the money, Because of they don\'t want to earn the money by themselves. So they act as an homeless.

>> Another reason is that some of them ask for sympathy to get some money because they don\'t want to work and to earn money by themselves. It\'s like they just pretend to be homeless.
And I also think some of the people who really couldn\'t go back to home. Maybe because of them suddenly go bankrupt. So their house is in pledge.

>> I also think that some people can\'t really go back home. Maybe they went bankrupt and their houses were in pledge.


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