homework

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for your composition today! I agree with you thoughts. It would be nice to live longer, but living forever is a different story. Having a temporal life is what makes it special.^^

T. JanE ^^

If someone discovered a formula that would enable us to live forever, would that be a blessing or a curse?
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I think it would be a curse.

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Because people want to live freely but all people didn\'t live freely, happily and piecefully.

>> People want to live freely, but most don\'t live freely, happily, and peacefully. 

Though Some people can do everything, but others didn.t.

>> Though some people can do everything, others can\'t. 

If we have an end, we think what is the most valuable.

>> If we have an end, we will think about the most valuable things in life. 

And they try to do this.

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