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2017-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? Theseday many young people have burden to live with their parents. Even thought their parents had taked care of them more than 20years, their son or daugther dont want to. I dont like my parents go to care home or nursing home. Because it is really cruel do to my parents. This problem is perfectly disadvantages to both. Because their son doesnt his responsible to their parents.

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Theseday many young people have burden to live with their parents. Even thought their parents had taked care of them more than 20years, their son or daugther dont want to.
I dont like my parents go to care home or nursing home. Because it is really cruel do to my parents. This problem is perfectly disadvantages to both. Because their son doesnt his responsible to their parents.

These days, young people have burden living with their parents. Even though their parents had take care of them for many years, their children don\'t want to take responsible for them after they become senior citizens. In my case, I don\'t like my parents to go to a nursing home because it is really cruel to do that.  

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