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2017-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi i have been too busy doing something. so i couldn`t read your feedback and write an english composition. on other words , i was lazy . to be honest , there is a time to write and read But sometimes everything is bother . after finishing from work i`m already exhausted So i think i should write and read today or i can do this tomorrow. keep on doing like this ...i put off doing my writing ...haha... so i`m gonna start an learning english to greet New year ! How can you be a good friend??? There is no answer to the question But all i can say is if there is a good events , share my joy with my buddy and if there is a bad happens , share sorrows with mate . You might not know , there is a proverb about friend " A friend in need is a friend indeed !

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Welcome back! It\'s great to see your name again on the composition board. I know that you are so busy with work these days. That\'s why I really appreciate your effort. Anyway, looking forward to studying with you next year.^^

~Kelly^^

Hi i have been too busy doing something. 

>> Hi! I have been too busy on doing something.

so i couldn`t read your feedback and write an english composition. 

>> So, I could not read your feedback and write an English composition. 

on other words , i was lazy .

>> In other words, I was lazy.

>> In other words, I have been lazy.

to be honest , there is a time to write and read 

>> To be honest, I had time to write and read.
But sometimes everything is bother.

>> But sometimes everything is bothersome.

after finishing from work i`m already exhausted 

>> After work, I\'m already exhausted. 
So i think i should write and read today or i can do this tomorrow. 

>> So, I planned to write and read but ended up delaying them the next day.

keep on doing like this ...

>> I kept on doing this.

i put off doing my writing ...haha...

>> I put off writing my composition.

so i`m gonna start an learning english to greet New year !

>> So, I am going to start the New year by learning English.
How can you be a good friend???

There is no answer to the question

>> There is no definite answer to this question.

But all i can say is if there is a good events , share my joy with my buddy and if there is a bad happens , share sorrows with mate . 

>> But, all I can say is that there are good events and joyful times with my buddy. I also share bad times and sorrowful moments with my mate.
 You might not know , there is a proverb about friend \" A friend in need is a friend indeed !

>> I\'m sure you know this proverb about friendship - \"A friend in need is a friend indeed!\"

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