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Hi there, [이름]!
Welcome back! It\'s great to see your name again on the composition board. I know that you are so busy with work these days. That\'s why I really appreciate your effort. Anyway, looking forward to studying with you next year.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi i have been too busy doing something.
>> Hi! I have been too busy on doing something.
so i couldn`t read your feedback and write an english composition.
>> So, I could not read your feedback and write an English composition.
on other words , i was lazy .
>> In other words, I was lazy.
>> In other words, I have been lazy.
to be honest , there is a time to write and read
>> To be honest, I had time to write and read.
But sometimes everything is bother.
>> But sometimes everything is bothersome.
after finishing from work i`m already exhausted
>> After work, I\'m already exhausted.
So i think i should write and read today or i can do this tomorrow.
>> So, I planned to write and read but ended up delaying them the next day.
keep on doing like this ...
>> I kept on doing this.
i put off doing my writing ...haha...
>> I put off writing my composition.
so i`m gonna start an learning english to greet New year !
>> So, I am going to start the New year by learning English.
How can you be a good friend???
There is no answer to the question
>> There is no definite answer to this question.
But all i can say is if there is a good events , share my joy with my buddy and if there is a bad happens , share sorrows with mate .
>> But, all I can say is that there are good events and joyful times with my buddy. I also share bad times and sorrowful moments with my mate.
You might not know , there is a proverb about friend \" A friend in need is a friend indeed !
>> I\'m sure you know this proverb about friendship - \"A friend in need is a friend indeed!\"
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