Homework

Hi, [이름]! :)
Thanks for writing this beautiful essay. 

I learned a lot from it and I totally agree to your opinion. 

It is true that many people know how to speak but only a few can truly communicate.

This question is very much related to our topic this morning.

It shows that even after a century, the art of communication has never been mastered by many.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow my dear.

~Teacher Charry ^_^ 

I agree that listening is more important than speaking in oral communication.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I agree that in communication, listening is more important than speaking in communication.

Fluent speaking skill and nice speech manner are helpful to make a good communication.

>> Fluent speaking skill and nice speech are helpful to make a good communication.

However those skills will be almost useless if a speaker answers in wrong way.

>> However, those skills will be almost useless if a speaker answers in wrong way.

Furthermore, people can usually sense that a companion of conversation listens what they say carefully or not.

>> Furthermore, people can usually sense if the person they are having a conversation with listens carefully to what they say or not.

When people feel that a listener doesn\'t concentrate on what they say, people might get negative feelings on the listener.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When people feel that a listener doesn\'t concentrate on what they say, people might get negative feelings about the listener.

Because listening well is one of the basic way to show respect to other people.

>> It\'s because listening well is one of the basic ways to show respect to other people.

I once told my classmate that my old dog takes a medicine everyday and it makes me really sad.

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OR >> I once mentioned to my classmate that my old dog takes a medicine everyday and it makes me depressed.

I expressed my sad feelings but she couldn\'t catch it and talked about how she could get dog medicine with low price through her veterinarian uncle.

>> I expressed my sad feelings but she couldn\'t catch it and talked about how she could get a medicine for my dog with a low price through her uncle who is a veterinarian.

I felt that she wasn\'t really listening what I said and didn\'t want to talk anymore.

>> I felt that she wasn\'t really listening to what I said and didn\'t want to talk anymore.

Listening well and understanding what other people want to say is the first step to have a good conversation.

>> CORRECT!

OR >>  Listening well and understanding what other people want to say is the first step to in having a good conversation.