homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework.
Based on your answer, I can say you are a thrifty person.
I rarely go to the expensive restaurants, but I also usually
go to the affordable one with my husband.
It is not about the price, but it is about the food that you eat and
the precious time with the family. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
There are many expensive restaurants in South Korea.
But I have never went there.
>> There are many expensive restaurants in South Korea but I never tried going there.
I have just went to the restaurants which costs properly.
>> I just tried going to the affordable restaurants
Among the restaurants which I have been, the most expensive one was cost about 40 dolls per person.
>> The cost of the most expensive food that I ordered from one of those affordable restaurants was 40 dollars.
I went there with my family this year.
But it wasn\'t as delicious as I thought.
>> I went there with my family but it wasn\'t as delicious as I thought.
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