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2017-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Don't be lazy. Your children look at you. Enjoy your life. You can do everything around you. Don't worry all of things. Just think in today's work. Tomorrow is not MY day. Thank you god, You give me today.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for your composition today! I think these are interesting labels.^^ Thanks for sharing. Have a good day!

T. JanE ^^

Don\'t be lazy.

>> Correct

Your children look at you.

>> Your children look up to you. 

Enjoy your life.

>> Correct

You can do everything around you.

>> Correct

Don\'t worry all of things.

>> Don\'t worry about anything. 

Just think in today\'s work.

>> Just think about today. 

Tomorrow is not MY day.

>> Correct

Thank you god, You give me today.

>> Correct


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