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I feel about smoking in public area is not good for other people.

>> I feel that smoking in public places is not good for people.

Because it\'s have risk about secondhand smoking to other people.

>> Second hand smoke causes many health risks.

And that cause a big health problem.

>> This is a big problem for people\'s health.

Futher more in public palces, there a lot of variety age of peiple including young children.

>> Furthermore, people of all ages are in public places.

Children bronchial tubes more sensitive thatn adult.

>> Children\'s lungs are more sensitive than adults\'.

so more becareful about influence of the smoking in public places.

>> We should always be careful of the effects of smoking in public places.