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The capital of South Korea is Seoul,South Korea and Seoul are experience very many event, but South korea and Seoul is development very fast speed. So today South Korea and Seoul is very good and convenient city. So for that reason i like seoul.
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~~ Teacher Mia ~~
The capital of South Korea is Seoul,South Korea and Seoul are experience very many event, but South korea and Seoul is development very fast speed. So today South Korea and Seoul is very good and convenient city. So for that reason i like seoul.
>> The capital of South Korea is Seoul. South Korea has already experienced many kinds of events but it has a fast development in technology. Seoul is a very good place to live in because it is convenient and that\'s the reason why I love it.
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