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I think this question came out based on a thought that communication with words is better than using images and impressions. If not, the expression 'too much of an effect' would not be used. My opinion is though, there is no reason that words are superior or better than images and impressions. The purpose of using words or images is eventually same. Furthermore, sometimes images and impressions are more effective to effect on people than words. For example, people might notice how global warming is serious more when they see a picture of a skinny and starving polar bear than they read an article about global warming. The important thing is how people receive messages from text, images and impressions and think actively by themselves. If people just receive messages in a passive way, they will be easily manipulated or fooled. For these reasons, I don't think images and impressions are particularly too much of an effect on people.
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Hello there [이름]!
I am impressed with how you have conveyed your thoughts about this matter.
It is true!
Non-verbal communication is more common than it\'s counterpart.
Verbal communication is actually just 20 percent of the communication process.
If a person knows how use and interpret non-verbal cues then chances are, that person becomes a powerful communicator.
We call these communicators the \"charismatic communicators\" because they can easily appeal to others by merely using body gestures.
I hope you are having a great day.
See you again on Tuesday
Happy New Year! ^_^
~Teacher Charry
I think this question came out based on a thought that communication with words is better than using images and impressions. >> CORRECT!
OR >> I think this question is based on a thought that communication with words is better than using images and impressions.
If not, the expression \'too much of an effect\' would not be used.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If not, the expression \'too much of an effect\' would not be recognized today.
My opinion is though, there is no reason that words are superior or better than images and impressions.
>> My opinion though is, there is no reason for words to be more superior or better than images and impressions.
The purpose of using words or images is eventually same.
>> The purpose of using words or images is eventually the same.
Furthermore, sometimes images and impressions are more effective to effect on people than words.
>> Furthermore, sometimes images and impressions are more effective in affecting people than words.
For example, people might notice how global warming is serious more when they see a picture of a skinny and starving polar bear than they read an article about global warming.
>> For example, people might notice how serious global warming is getting each year when they see a picture of a skinny and starving polar bear than just reading an article about global warming.
The important thing is how people receive messages from text, images and impressions and think actively by themselves.
>> The important thing is how people receive messages from a text, images and impressions and think actively by themselves.
If people just receive messages in a passive way, they will be easily manipulated or fooled.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If people only receive messages in a passive way, it is easy for them to be manipulated or fooled.
For these reasons, I don\'t think images and impressions are particularly too much of an effect on people.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Because of these reasons, I don\'t think images and impressions are particularly too much of an effect on people.
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