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Hi [이름]!

Happy New year!

You\'re really starting the year right.

Thank you for your composition.

I hope you will continue to work hard this year.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

My himetown is a Daegu City.

>> My hometown is Daegu City.

And daegu has a lot merits, but also has demerits too.

>> Daegu has both good and bad points.

First, their transportation inconvenience than seoul.

>> We don\'t have a lot of convenient means of transportation like they do in Seoul.

Seoul has a lot of substation so I can get easier that the way I didn\'t go before.

>> There are a lot of subway stations in Seoul so I can move around easier even if I\'m not familiar with the places.

But daegu has less substation and it is difficult when I am go the first time.

>> There are only a few subway stations in Daegu so it\'s more difficult if you\'re going there for the first time.
Second, many event, project of festivals doesn\'t host at daegu.

>> Second, they don\'t really hold famous events and festivals in Daegu.

Becuase daegu is a region so it didn\'t much chance like that.

>> Daegu is not a capital city so these things are not common.