Homework

Happy Wednesday [이름]!

I hope this day is going great for you.

Thank you for writing this essay and explaining the importance of balance.

I agree that most of the time, people have the tendency to focus on a single side only rather than maintaining balance on both sides.

I think it\'s possible but many of us are selfish.

Anyhow, this is just how I see it.

See you again tomorrow.

Stay warm and safe. ^_^

~Teacher Charry

Sometimes, there are conflicts of interests between individuals and community.

>> Sometimes, there are conflicts of interests between individuals and the community.

For example, if a soccer player tries to do everything by him/herself, a team might lose.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> For instance, if a soccer player tries to do everything by him/herself, a team might lose.

A soccer player who can make a good assistance when it is needed might be more valuable then a player who is just good at individual skills.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A soccer player who is a team player might be more valuable then a player who is just good at individual skills.

This is because we can\'t solve everything alone but have to work out together with other people.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This is because we can\'t solve everything alone but have to work with other to succeed.

However I don\'t think individuals always put groups\' or communities\' goals first than their own interests.

>> However, I don\'t think individuals always put groups\' or communities\' goals higher than their own interests.

Emphasizing only communities\' goals can decrease individuals\' will.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Giving sole emphasis on the communities\' goals can decrease individuals\' interest.

I think one of the reason why socialist countries failed is that they ignored individuals\' interests too much and only put communities\' interests.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think one of the reason why socialist countries failed is that they only focused on the communities\' interests and didn\'t put too much attention on the individuals\' interests.

I know always just saying is easy but finding a balance between groups\' interests and individuals\' interests well is the best answer we can have.

>> [Do you mean]: I know it is easier said than done but finding a balance between the groups\' interests and the individuals\' interests well is the best answer we can have.