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In mt country, people usually two different way to find a job.

>> In my country, there are usually two ways for people to find a job.

One is find right away after graduate high school. and theother is entered the vollege and find job after graduated.

>> The first one is when Koreans look for a job right after graduating from high school.

and theother is entered the vollege and find job after graduated.

>> The second one is when they look for a job after graduating from College.

First one generally graduated vocational school.

>> The people who fall under the first group normally finishes a vocational course.

But most people want to go a college because it is more advantages to receive higher pay.

>> However, most people opt to go to college since this will lead to more opportunities for a higher pay.

And that cause serious problem of unemployment of a highly educated person.

>> This causes a serious problem of unemployment for highly educated people.