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Hi there [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for giving me this insight.

It is true that we shouldn\'t only focus on our long term goals but also pay attention to the small but great details that we experience on a daily basis.

I guess people who only focus on the long term goals are not as happy as the people who also appreciate the minute details in their daily life.

Anyhow, I hope you stay happy even if you\'re preparing hard for your bar exam.

You can do it! I know you will pass and top that exam.

I\'m really excited for you.

See you after your trip to India.

Take care always.

~Teacher Charry :)

I think that living in the moment is a good way to live.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, living in the moment is a good way to live.

I don\'t deny that people should have long term plans and consider future too.

>> I don\'t deny that people should have long term plans and consider the future too.

However, concentrating on the moment sometimes is helpful to relieve stress and even to set up long term plans.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However, focusing on the moment sometimes is helpful to relieve stress and even to set up long term goals.

Some of my classmates are walking like zombies these days and say there is no fun at all until they pass the exam so they endure this moment for the bright future.

>> Some of my classmates are walking like zombies these days and say there is no fun at all until they pass the exam so they endure this moment for a bright future.

I understand the long term goal which is to pass the exam is really important.

>> I understand that the long term goal, which is to pass the exam, is really important.

I don\'t want to sacrifice every happiness until I finally pass the exam though.

>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don\'t want to sacrifice my entire happiness until I finally pass the exam though.

Because even if we pass the exam and become a lawyer as we want to, there must be another goals to achieve in future.

>> Because even if we pass the exam and become a lawyer as we want to, there must be another goal to achieve in the future.

I never forget the most important goal on this moment but also can concentrate on what happens right now like how the sky is blue and beautiful today.

>> I should never forget the most important goal this moment but I should also concentrate on what happens right now like how blue the sky is and what a beautiful day it is today.

It\'s possible that living in the moment and enjoying every details in daily life while having a long term goals.

>>  It\'s possible to live in the moment and enjoy every detail in daily life while having long term goals.