homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
My ambition in my life is becoming reach.
Sadly I didn't find the right way to become reach until now.
But I will continue.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
Hello.
>> Correct!
>> Hi.
My ambition in my life is becoming reach.
My ambition in my life is becoming reach.
>> My ambition in life is to become rich.
Sadly I didn\'t find the right way to become reach until now.
Sadly I didn\'t find the right way to become reach until now.
>> Unfortunately, I haven\'t found the right way to become rich by now.
But I will continue.
But I will continue.
>> But I will persevere.
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