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Question: Who is the most interesting person you met on one of your travels? Describe him or her.
I would like to describe a elderly couple who I met on a trip in Australia, In 2013.
I enjoyed my Christmas holiday with my family in Big4 holiday park placed nearby the Greater Sydney in Austraila.
On second day in there, I had a walk on the track which linked all through the park I saw a huge hybrid camping car, conversion bus, and met a gentleman.
After exchange greeting, He introduced his wife, leading me inside of the bus which was filled with all sorts of living fercilities.
I knew many behind stories about him that was the man who was a builder and his wife had made a plan to travel entire Australia by camping car since they were young.
Unfortunately, the old couple do not have a baby, but it help them to embark their journey immediately to the unknown world they never get there after their retirement.
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>> I would like to describe an elderly couple whom I met on a trip in Australia last 2013.
I enjoyed my Christmas holiday with my family in Big4 holiday park placed nearby the Greater Sydney in Austraila.
I enjoyed my Christmas holiday with my family in Big4 holiday park placed nearby the Greater Sydney in Austraila.
>> I was enjoying my Christmas holiday with my family in Big 4 park near the Greater Sydney in Australia.
On second day in there, I had a walk on the track which linked all through the park I saw a huge hybrid camping car, conversion bus, and met a gentleman.
On second day in there, I had a walk on the track which linked all through the park I saw a huge hybrid camping car, conversion bus, and met a gentleman.
>> One day while I was walking on the track which is linked all through the park, I saw a hybrid camping car that looks like a converted bus and I also met a gentleman.
After exchange greeting, He introduced his wife, leading me inside of the bus which was filled with all sorts of living fercilities.
After exchange greeting, He introduced his wife, leading me inside of the bus which was filled with all sorts of living fercilities.
>> After we exchanged greetings, he introduced his wife and brought me inside their recreational vehicle which is equipped with living space and amenities found in a home.
I knew many behind stories about him that was the man who was a builder and his wife had made a plan to travel entire Australia by camping car since they were young.
I knew many behind stories about him that was the man who was a builder and his wife had made a plan to travel entire Australia by camping car since they were young.
>> I learned that this man was a builder and his wife had been planning to travel the entire Australia by a camping car since they were young.
Unfortunately, the old couple do not have a baby, but it help them to embark their journey immediately to the unknown world they never get there after their retirement.
Unfortunately, the old couple do not have a baby, but it help them to embark their journey immediately to the unknown world they never get there after their retirement.
>> However, the old couple don\'t have children but this helps also for them to embark their journey to wherever they want to go without any disruptions.
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