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Hi Kiddo,
I like your answer. It\'s appropriate to the question and I agree with your opinion. I also like people who has their own styles.
See you!
Amanda ^-^
I don’ care the hair color.
>> I don\'t care about hair color.
And it is depends on what do they like.
>> It depends on what color they like.
Currently the green hair is not that popular hair style.
>> Currently, green is not a popular hair color.
>> OR: Currently, green hair is not popular.
So it means people who have the green hair has their own think.
>> It means that people who have green hairs thinks independently. They don\'t just follow the current trends, they have their own style.
I like those people.
>> Correct
>> OR: I like those kind of people.
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