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When I look at a small quilting bag , I feel missing to my friend.
When she got the first salary, she bought me it. I felt that she knew my favorite thing
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When I look at a small quilting bag , I feel missing to my friend.
>> When I look at a small quilting bag, I miss my friend.
When she got the first salary, she bought me it.
>> When she received her first salary, she bought it for me.
I felt that she knew my favorite thing.
>> Correct
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