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2018-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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11/13 What do you do when you encounter obstacles to success? I try to think about that he can do it, she can do it, you can do it, why not me?....Sometimes I want to avoid the situations so I find the person who can solve the problems instead of me or try to find th reason that I can't do it. It is so shameful. I really hate this feeling so I just do it.

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Hi there MISS [이름]!

I already made the necessary correction. Kindly go over them.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

11/13 What do you do when you encounter obstacles to success?

I try to think about that he can do it, she can do it, you can do it, why not me?

>>> I try to think that if others can, why can\'t I?

....Sometimes I want to avoid the situations so I find the person who
can solve the problems instead of me or try to find th reason that I can\'t do it.

>>> Sometimes I want to avoid the situation so I find some people who can solve the problem for me or I just give up.

It is so shameful.

>>> Correct!

I really hate this feeling so I just do it.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: I really hate this feeling so I try to find some ways to overcome the obstacles.

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