homework
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Hello!
I don't like to use the sentence of "When I was young" because if I use this sentence it seems like I have already been got old.
In my 20's I usually played volleyball and sometimes I also went to swim.
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~~ Teacher Kathy
Hello!
I don\'t like to use the sentence of \"When I was young\" because if I use this sentence it seems like I have already been got old.
I don\'t like to use the sentence of \"When I was young\" because if I use this sentence it seems like I have already been got old.
>> I don\'t really like to use the prhase \"when I was young\" because it makes me feel old.
In my 20\'s I usually played volleyball and sometimes I also went to swim.
In my 20\'s I usually played volleyball and sometimes I also went to swim.
>> Back in my 20\'s, I used to play volleyball and I won a swimming competition one time.
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