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ESSAY WRITING:\"Better late than never.\"
While having lived in busy modern society, our surroungs have pressed us making a lot of mischoices that would not be happened.
No one is able to take a time back, however the one also has a posibility to get a second attempt that preventing the situation is not going worth.
When you are in a moment of choice, It is hard to define which one is the better way to bring best result.
Almost all of ordinary people are frequently hesitate, but we must remember that hardship give people an ability to endure it well, making them a strong and rigid.
If someone recognize something is wrong, the one should stop doing, trying to find solution.
Through many extraordinary people\'s biography, we have been learnt a lesson imortance of second trial.
Today, trying to do somthing that you have kept deep inside of your mind.
It is noy too late to do!
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While having lived in busy modern society, our surroungs have pressed us making a lot of mischoices that would not be happened.
>> While living in a busy and modern society, our surroundings cause us to do things that aren\'t supposed to happen.
No one is able to take a time back, however the one also has a posibility to get a second attempt that preventing the situation is not going worth.
No one is able to take a time back, however the one also has a posibility to get a second attempt that preventing the situation is not going worth.
>> No one can return back the time. However, everyone has a second chance to do the right thing and correct their mistakes.
When you are in a moment of choice, It is hard to define which one is the better way to bring best result.
When you are in a moment of choice, It is hard to define which one is the better way to bring best result.
>> When we are in a moment where you have to make a choice, it is usually difficult to choose which one is the best among the choices.
Almost all of ordinary people are frequently hesitate, but we must remember that hardship give people an ability to endure it well, making them a strong and rigid.
Almost all of ordinary people are frequently hesitate, but we must remember that hardship give people an ability to endure it well, making them a strong and rigid.
>> This is natural to most people, but we should remember that experience of hardships can mold us into a better person making us stronger and smarter.
If someone recognize something is wrong, the one should stop doing, trying to find solution.
If someone recognize something is wrong, the one should stop doing, trying to find solution.
>> If we recognize that something is wrong then we should stop doing it and try our best to find the best way on how to do it.
Through many extraordinary people\'s biography, we have been learnt a lesson imortance of second trial.
Through many extraordinary people\'s biography, we have been learnt a lesson imortance of second trial.
>> Many people\'s biography tries to teach us the importance of trying to do things one more time.
Today, trying to do somthing that you have kept deep inside of your mind.
Today, trying to do somthing that you have kept deep inside of your mind.
>> Therefore, do whatever good things that you wanted to do.
It is noy too late to do!
It is noy too late to do!
>> It\'s not too late to do it and besides, it is \'better late than never\'.
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